Parvīn Dawlatābādī: The Poet of the Literary Elite
The Life and Works of Dawlatābādī1“Originally written in Persian, this article is translated by the editorial team of Women Poets Iranica.” Simin Behbahani called Parvīn Dawlatābādī the poet of the literary elite because of her companionship with the intelligentsia and the literati. See: Sīmīn Bihbahānī, “Yād-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [In memory of Parvīn Dawlatābādī], Bukhārā 14, no. 82 (Murdād-Sharīvar 1390/August-September 2011): 621.
Parvīn Dawlatābādī was born in Ahmadābād district, Isfahān in 1303/1924 (see Figure 2). Her mother, Fakhr-i Gītī or Fakhriyah Khānum Dawlatābādī (1282–1362/1903–1983), was the headmistress of Nāmūs where Parvīn was enrolled. After her family moved to Tehran, she continued her education in other schools such as Nawrūz, Nūr and Sidāqat, and Nūrbakhsh. Her father, Hisām al-Dīn Dawlatābādī (1282–1364/1903–1985), was a poet and a representative of the people of Isfahān for several years; subsequently, he was appointed as the mayor of Tehran.
Dawlatābādī continued her education in Tehran’s College of Fine Arts in order to study music and sculpture, but after a visit to Amīnābād’s municipality nursery, she left the university to work full time there. For many years she worked at the nursery without pay and brought hope and love to the children with her poems. Later on, she was employed by the National Iranian Oil Company and worked to help improve the literacy of the company’s workers. Dawlatābādī started writing poetry from her early youth and her first poems were published in Payk magazine.2These biographical details are drawn variously from: Rizā Bayāt, “Dawlatābādī, Parvīn,” in Dānishnāmah-yi jahān-i Islām [Encyclopedia of the world of Islam], vol. 82 (1392/2013), 365–66; the authors’ interview with Shīvā Dawlatābādī (sister of Parvīn), Tīr 2, 1402/ June 28, 2023; ‘Ābidī, Bih raghm-i panjirih′hā-yi bastah: Shi‘r-i mu‘āsir-i zanān [In spite of closed windows: Poetry of contemporary women] (Tehran: Kitāb-i Nādir, 1380/2001), 45. Some claim that Dawlatābādī started writing poetry when she was fourteen years old and that she published more than five hundred poems in Payk Magazine. See: Nūshāfarīn Ansārī, “Lālāyīkhvān-i kūdakān-i dīrūz: Bih
bahānah-yi hashtumīn sāl-i darguzasht-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [Children’s lullabies singer: On the eighth anniversary of the death of Parvīn Dawlatābādī], Īrān (Tehran), no. 6191, Farvardīn 29, 1395/ April 17, 2016, 24. It is worth noting that the poems of Dawlatābādī published in Payk have also been published in her book Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā Majmū‘ah-yi shiʿr barāyi kūdakān va nawjavānān [On the boat of clouds: Collections of poems for children and youth] and there are not five hundred of them. See: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā: Majmū‘ah-yi shiʿr barāyi kūdakān va nawjavānān (Shiraz: Rāhgushā, 1378/1997). Apparently, Dawlatābādī also studied with the famous literary man, Nizām Vafā. See: Ghazal Tājbakhsh, Zan, Shi‘r va andīshah [Woman, poetry and thought] Tehran: Rushangarān va Mutali‘āt-i Zanān, 1378/1999), 91. In a letter to Mahīn Hishmatī, Dawlatābādī wrote on her time in Aminābād and cooperation with Ziā’ al-Dīn Jināb, stating: “With Jināb…we attended to the nursery in Aminābād in 1332 [1953]. Every morning at seven we would go to Aminābād; he would return to the city at noon, and I would return late in the evening.” See “Ziā’ al-Dīn Jināb,” Kāvah 67 (Spring 1357/1978): 60. Parvīn is usually considered a children’s poet, but between the years 1349–1401/1970–2022 numerous works of hers in different poetic genres have been published.3Dawlatābādī’s poetry books include: Shūrāb:Barguzīdah-yi shi‘r [Brackish water: Selected poems], (1349/1970); Ātash va āb: Barguzīdah-yi shi‘r [Fire and water: Selected poetry], (1353/1974); Mihrtāb: Guzidah-i ash‘ār [Love shine: Selected poems], (1378/1999); Shahr-i sangī: Guzidah-yi ghazal′hā, masnavī′hā va chahār-pārih′hā, va ash‘ār-i naw [The Stone city: Selected ghazals, masnavī, couplets and new poetry], (1382/2003); Dar bulūrīn jāmah-i angūr [Within the crystal garment of the Grape], (1382/2003); Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī [The silver crescent], (1382/2003). Shi‘r-i gul-i bādām: Majmū‘ih-yi ghazal [Poetry of almond blossoms: Collection of ghazals] won the poetry award of Shurā-yi Kitāb-i Kūdak [The Children’s Book Council] in 1378/1997. See Bayāt, “Dawlatābādī, Parvīn,” 365–66. She also won the second round of Parvīn I‘tisāmī’s award. See Ramazān Ibrāhīmzādah Gurjī, “Rūydād′hā-yi farhangī” [Cultural events], Kayhān-i Farhangī 245 (Isfand 1386/March 2007): 77. Some of her other books of children’s poetry include: Gul rā bishinās kūdak-i man. [Know the flower my child], (1370/1991); Qissah-i murgh-i surkh-i pākūtāh [The Tale of the red short-legged chicken in verse], (1370/1991); Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā (1374/1995); Gul āmad va gul āmad [Flowers have appeared, adaptation of Hanz Christian Anderson’s Little Ida’s Flower], (1372/1993); Bāz ham bahār āmad [Spring came again], (n.d.); Asb-i chūbī [Wooden horse], (1395/2016); and Khānah-i muqavvā’ī [Cardboard house], (1379/2000). Sūdābah Amīnī has also published a selection of Dawlatābādī’s poems entitled Sukhan az sitārah guftan [Talking of the stars] , (1401/2022). For instance, Manzūr-i khiradmand (The Sage’s intention, 1367/1988), a rare study on Jahān Malik Khātūn (AH 724–795/1324–1393), a contemporary poet of Hāfiz (AH 725–791/1325–1389), was also written by Parvīn Dawlatābādī.4Note that these are the estimated birth and death dates of Khātūn, and that there are many different opinions on the birth date of Hāfiz.
Dawlatābādī, who chose the pen name of “Parī,” first gained fame through writing ghazal and, in the second half of her life, she wrote several masnavīs. She died in Tehran on Farvardīn 27, 1387/ April 15, 2008, aged 84, after a period of illness. It is worth mentioning that Dawlatābādī only used her pen name of “Parī” up to the early 1340s/1960s and later on one cannot find any sign of this pen name in her poetry. “Parī” has some similarity to her own name, helping her to maintain her poetical identity since her first name has somehow put her under the great shadow of another contemporary famous poet, Parvīn I‘tisāmī.
In 1327/1948, Parvīn Dawlatābādī wrote an introduction to Javād Fāzil’s (1295–1340/1916–1961) novel, Āy ārizū-yi man (O, my wish, n.d.), the content of which shows her attention to the deplorable condition of Iranian women. She states,
Reading Āy ārizū-yi man, unwantedly you will find yourself in the depths of [the] stormy soul of a woman…. The sweet story of “Parī” who leaves the tumultuous Tehran to follow her wish sitting upon the wings of dreams talking to you of great Europe is one of the thousand scenes of the real life of our women that the darkness of fear and the rays of hope are shown in its shade and the flame of sighs and smile of happiness and flood of tears and rivers of blood amid its lines represent the reality of mental and social life of our people…. Our women… whether in the power and greatness of civilization and modernity of today or under the black and deadly veil which is the shroud of their life and the grave of their wishes, all have bright hearts and emotions and the influences of those having broken down some barriers sometimes afflicted with permissiveness and the regrets of these being silenced by the darkness of the veil silencing their souls, both create art…. The thoughts of women in real and permanent scenes of our life are boring and cause heartbreaking facts the gist of that the young and sensitive [Fāzil] has produced in his book offering it to the society in which even if the backwardness of women and the depravation of the population is of no use, at least it produces suitable atmosphere for the artists to think deeper… to burn more, to write more delicately… and maybe the happiness of tomorrow is laid upon the ashes of grief.5Refer to the introduction of Javād Fāzil’s, Āy ārizū-yi man [O, my wish] (Tehran: Kānūn-i Ma‘rifat, n.d.), 1.
Although, Dawlatābādī is a contemporary poet from a well-known family, many researchers and media sources have committed gross errors in narrating her life, education, and cultural endeavors. Obviously, they have confused her life story with that of Mahdukht Dawlatābādī.6For instance, Nāsir Takmīl Humāyūn (1315–1401/1936–2022) states that Hisām al-Dīn (Dawlatābādī’s father) was the cousin of Hāj Mīrzā Yahyā Dawlatābādī (1241–1318/1862–1939) and Siddiqah Dawlatābādī (1261–1340/1882–1961) and that he was interested in Musaddiq’s movement. See Nāsir Takmīl Humāyūn, “Bih yād-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [In memory of Parvīn Dawlatābādī], Bukhārā 15, no. 86 (Farvardīn-Urdībihisht 1391/April-May 2012): 689–98. Almost all of what Takmīl Humāyūn has presented in this paper is incorrect. First, Hāj Mīrzā Mahdī (father of Hisām al-Dīn) is not the brother of Hāj Mirza Hādī (1247–1326/1868–1947) but he is his son, and he is also a brother to Yahyā Dawlatābādī, see: Yahyā Dawlatābādī, Hayāt-i Yahyā [Yahyā’s life] (2nd repr. ed., Tehran: ‘Attār, 1362/1983), 1:344. For the second claim, it must be said that, at least according to an essay by Hisām al-Dīn himself, he was always against Musaddiq. See Hisām al-Dīn Dawlatābādī, “Siyāsat va talāsh” [Politics and effort], Vahīd (Khātirāt) 26 (Āzar 1352/December 1973): 19–22. It is also worth mentioning that Simin Behbahani who was a friend of Dawlatābādī from a young age has incorrectly named “Parvīn Dawlatābādī” as the niece of Siddīqah Dawlatābādī even though, as it was mentioned above, Siddīqah is the aunt of Dawlatābādī ’s father. See: Sīmīn Bihbahānī, “Yād-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī,” 620. Such mistakes about Dawlatābādī are not limited to the media or scholarly essays as some books have also mentioned incorrect information on very public issues such as her birth date. For example, the writer of Sukhan-i ahl-i dil [The Conversation of the Wise] mentions 1314/1935 as the year of her birth, see Sa‘īd Niyāz Kirmānī, Sukhan-i ahl-i dil: Sharh-i ahvāl va āsār-i gūyandigān-i buzurg-i zabān-i Fārsī az āghāz tā imrūz [The Conversation of the wise: Biography of great writers of Persian language from the beginning to now] (Tehran: Pāzhang, 1367/1988), 124; Niyāz Kirmānī has probably repeated the mistake of Mushīr Salīmī. See ‘Alī Akbar Mushīr Salīmī, Zanān-i sukhanvar [Women Writers] (Tehran: ‘Ilmī, 1337/1956), 1: 118. Another mistake of Takmīl Humāyūn concerns the education and services of Parvīn Dawlatābādī. He states that she studied educational psychology in Britain and America. He also considers her to be one of the founders of The Children’s Book Council and an editor of children’s books (Franklin Publications). See, Takmīl Humāyūn, “Bih yād-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī,” 691. Obviously, he has confused Dawlatābādī’s life with that of Mahdukht Dawlatābādī and what he attributes to Parvīn Dawlatābādī is mostly derived from Mahdukht’s Dawlatābādī ’s career. According to Īrān Newspaper, Nūshāfarīn Ansārī (then editor of The Children’s Book Council) in an interview with an ISNA reporter states that Parvīn Dawlatābādī was not a member of The Children’s Book Council (Iran) and that the similarity of the surnames has been the cause of this mistake. In fact, Mahdukht Dawlatābādī had been a member of the Children’s book council. See, “Shā‘irī dar āghūsh-i kūdakān: Yāzdah sāl pas az marg-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [A poet in the arms of children: Eleven years after the death of Parvīn Dawlatābādī], Īrān (Tehran), no. 7037, Farvardīn 28, 1398/April 17, 2019, 24; also see, Melissa Mi‘mār, “Asad Allāh Sha‘bānī: Parvīn Dawlatābādī khudash rā mādar-i hamah-yi kūdakān mīdānist,” Khabarguzārī-yi kitāb-i Īrān [Iran Book News Agency], Farvardīn 27, 1399 /15 April 2020. Although what Takmīl Humāyūn has attributed to Dawlatābādī is not exact, it seems that she pursued other activities in publishing and establishing libraries for children with Dr. Khānlarī. Pūrān Sārimī claims: “at that time [Ismā‘īl Sārimī] published his works alongside Dr. Khānlarī and with the help of Dr. Khānlarī, Zahrā Khānlarī and the contemporary esteemed poet, Parvīn Dawlatābādī, established Sukhan Library.” See Pūrān Sārimī, “Yādī az Ismā‘īl Sārimī: Mardī az tabār-i ‘ishq va shu‘ūr va shi‘r” [Remembering Ismā‘īl Sārimī, A man of love, understanding and poetry], Āzmā 58 (Khurdād 1387/June 2008): 12. Ismā‘īl Sārimī was the husband of Parvīn Dawlatābādī. See also: Suhaylā Haqīqat (Dawlatābādī) “Yād va yādbūd: Mādar-i zamīn” [Remembering: Mother earth], Bukhārā 66 (Murdād-Shahrīvar 1387/August-September 2008): 548–50. Media, newspapers, and writers have not been able to provide an exact narrative of her life and have made mistakes. For example, in a piece on Dawlatābādī ’s death, I‘timād Newspaper claimed that she had her education in America, see “Parvīn Dawlatābādī : Marg-i shā‘ir-i jumjumak barg-i khazūn,” [Parvīn Dawlatābādī : Death of the poet of falling autumn leaves], I‘timād (Tehran), no. 1652, Farvardīn 28, 1387/April 16, 2008, 20. Further, the BBC website and some other media have committed the same mistake and published essays saying that Dawlatābādī had a PhD in early childhood education from America, see “Parvīn Dawlatābādī, shā‘ir-i shi’‘r-i kūdak Darguzasht,” Tārnāma-yi BBC Fārsī, [Webpage of Persian BBC] accessed October 23, 2023, https://bbc.in/3eNfdAK. “Parvīn Dawlatābādī bunyānguzār-i shi‘r-i kūdak-i Īrān darguzasht,” Tārnamā-yi kānūn-i zanān-i Īrānī [Webpage of The center of Iranian women], Farvardīn 27, 1387/April 15, 2008.
Another noteworthy point about Parvīn Dawlatābādī relates to her poems printed in different magazines throughout the years. Publication of her poems over many decades (from the 1330s to the1380s/the 1950s to the 2000s), show the attention of the media and magazines to her poetry. It is worth noting that I have tracked down over thirty poems by Parvīn Dawlatābādī which were published in various journals over the years, including: Yaghmā,7For instance, see Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Chang-i gham” [Lyre of grief], Yaghmā 11 (Farvardīn 1328/April 1949): 6. Rawshanfikr,8For instance, see Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Sang-i sabūr” [Patient stone], Rawshanfikr 110 (Shahrīvar 16, 1334/ September 8, 1955): 14; “Nashud” [Did not happen], Rawshanfikr 112 (Shahrīvar 30, 1334/ September 22, 1955), 14; “Jām-i mudām” [“Constant cup”], Rawshanfikr 113 (Mihr 16, 1334/ September 29,1955): 22; “Khākistar-i dard” [Ashes of pain], Rawshanfikr 114 (Mihr 13, 1334/October 6, 1955): 14; “Kulāh-i ātashīn” [Fiery hat], Rawshanfikr 116 (Mihr 27, 1334/ October 20, 1955): 14; “Ashk-i bīhingām” [Sudden tears], Rawshanfikr, no. 122 (Āzar 9, 1334/ December 1, 1955): 14; “Sāghar-i andūh” [Cup of pain], Rawshanfikr 125 (Āzar 30, 1334/ December 22, 1955): 14; “Dunyā-yi qissah′hā” [World of tales], Rawshanfikr 134 (Isfand 3, 1334/February 23, 1956): 16; “Rusvā” [Disgraced], Rawshanfikr 137 (Farvardīn 2, 1335/March 23, 1956): 27. Kāvah,9For instance, see: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Yik lahzah bīsh nīst” [Not more than a moment], Kāvah (Munich) 3, (Khurdād 1342/June 1963): 74–75; “Nawrūz,” Kāvah (Munich) 1 (Farvardīn 1342/April 1963): 51. Vahīd,10For instance, see: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Shabnamī bas ast” [A dewdrop is enough], Vahīd 5, no. 49 (Day 1346/January 1968): 2. Āmūzish va parvarish (Ta‘līm va tarbiyat),11For instance, see: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Surūd-i subhgāhī” [Morning Song], Āmūzish va parvarish, (Ta‘līm va tarbiyat) 47, no. 321 (Mihr 1356/October 1977): 167–68. Chīstā,12For instance, see: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Shi‘r” [Poem] (Untitled). Chīstā 202–3 (Ābān–Āzar 1382/November–December 2003): 256. Bukhārā,13For instance, see: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Biyā …” [Come…], Bukhārā 37 (Murdad 1383/July 2004): 263. etc.14For a list of some of Dawlatābādī ’s poems published in magazines, please see the master bibliography for this article. Also, in the early 1330s/1950s, Rawshanfikr magazine published a report on Dawlatābādī accompanied with her photo. See: “Shā‘ir-i pursūz va gudāz” [Poet of pain and suffering], Rawshanfikr 61 (1 Mihr 1333/23 September 1954), 25. Parvīn Dawlatābādī is also one of the few poets that literary individuals and outstanding modern poets such as Shāmlū (1304–1999/1925–2000) have dedicated a poem to.15For example, Jalāl al-Dīn Humā’ī, the famous scholar (1278–1359/1899–1980), dedicated a poem to Dawlatābādī: O, heart if you are clear-eyed and you defer to taste and literature See in the horizon of poetry shining like the sun is Parvīn among the stars. See Parvīn Dawlatābādī, Introduction to Mihrtāb (Tehran: Tūs, 1378/1999), 1. Date of composition of this poem is 1326/1947. Shāmlū, in the collection of Bāgh-i āyinah [Garden of mirrors], also has dedicated a poem entitled “Tarh” [Plot] to Parvīn Dawlatābādī: Night with bloody throat has sung late The sea sitting cold A bough Screams Toward light In the darkness of the jungle. See: Ahmad Shāmlū, Majmū’ah-yi āsār, vol. 1 shi‘r′hā 1323–1378 [Collected works, vol. 1, Poems 1944–1999] (4th repr. ed., Tehran: Nigāh, 1382/2003), 344–45. Another famous poet, Ra‘dī Āzarakhshī (1288–1378/1909–1999), has dedicated a poem to Dawlatābādī opening with “Ra‘dī read the ghazal by the pen of Parvīn / Said we are drunk by this pure wine,” see: Ghulām ‘Alī Ra‘dī Āzarakhshī, “Khāb-i āshuftah” [Disturbed sleep], Vahīd 40 (Farvardīn 1346/April 1967), 294. Shahriyār has also a ghazal entitled “Intizār” [Waiting] with the opening distich, “O you the shining star did not come again tonight / O, you dawn of the night of separation did not come again tonight.” There is another line in this ghazal worth noting: “You are the divan of Hāfiz and I am mad for you / But you fairy did not come to see the divan.” Shīvā Dawlatābādī claims Shahriyār dedicated this line to her sister, Parvīn Dawlatābādī, and that the Dawlatābādī herself always referred to it; see: Author’s interview with Shīvā Dawlatābādī, Tīr 7, 1402/June 28, 2023. However, in the older or the later editions of Dīvān-i Shahriyār it is not mentioned that he dedicated this line to Dawlatābādī, see for example: Muhammad Husayn Shahriyār, Dīvān-i Shahriyār (31st repr. ed., Tehran: Nigāh, 1387/2008), 1:390; Muhammad Husayn Shahriyār, Dīvān-i Shahriyār (Tehran: Sa‘dī Tabrīz, 1346/1967), 146. My further research in some journals that have published the poem showed it was not dedicated to Dawlatābādī nor anyone else, see for example: Muhammad Husayn Shahriyār, “Intizār” [Waiting], Āshuftah 8, no. 27 (Tīr 17, 1333/July 8, 1954): 28.
The reason for such praise is probably the intertextual status of Dawlatābādī in Persian poetry.16Some critics have considered Dawlatābādī belonging to the moderate modern poets such as Tavallalī, Khānlarī and Gulchīn Gīlānī or think that she has followed these poets. See: ‘Ābidī, Bih raghm-i panjirih′hā-yi bastah, 47; Ismā‘īl Nūrī ‘Alā, Suvar va asbāb dar shi‘r-i imrūz-i Īrān [Image and technique in Iran’s modern poetry] (Tehran: Bāmdād, 1348/1969), 151–52. In fact, this moderate modernism has put her in a position of inter-dialogue with modern and classical poetry.
The masnavī “Az tāk tā sāghar” (From vine to wineglass) was the last poem of Dawlatābādī which was printed in Āvīn magazine but never published in any of her books. She composed this masnavī toward the end of her life.17See: Parvīn Dawlatābādī, “Az tāk tā sāghar,” Āvīn 5, no. 20 (Spring and Summer 1386/2007), 17–18. Dawlatābādī’s view regarding vine, cup, and wine is completely mystical; this mystical interpretation can be compared to the rationalistic critical approach of Īraj Mīrzā in his poem “Sharāb” [“Wine”] where he begins with “I wish the vine dries up and God / keeps humans from this evil.” See Īraj Mīrzā, Dīvān-i Īraj Mīrzā, ed. Muhammad Ja‘far Mahjūb (3rd repr. ed., Tehran: n.p., 1353/1974), 164. Notably, there are several manuscripts of Dawlatābādī ’s that are not included in her published books. For example, a photo of one her unpublished handwritten poems that was sent to the author follows below (see Figure 3).
Besides these unpublished manuscripts, Dawlatābādī has a very important unpublished poem entitled “Sangsār” (Stoning to death) that was composed in the early days of the Revolution (probably 1978 or 1979). The only version of this poem available is an audio cassette recording of Dawlatābādī ’s voice reading the poem aloud that I was able to listen to courtesy of the family. In this outstanding and highly critical narrative poem, she questions the inhuman and ugly act of stoning a person to death. A part of the poem is provided here:
As a green tree yielding to autumn,
To the calm vision of destruction
So as the furies do not make excuses
Woman with the cascade of dark tresses covering her shoulder
I am waiting for the verdict of hangman
An unclean hand emerged at last
A cry came out of the unfeeling throats
The cascade of hair was cut off
The hair was cut to brand her shame
Branded with deceit and pretense18I was informed of this poem and permitted to listen to it in an interview with Shīvā Dawlatābādī. Interview with Shīvā Dawlatābādī (sister of Parvīn Dawlatābādī) Tīr 7, 1402/June 28, 2023.
Intertextuality in the Poetry of Parvīn Dawlatābādī
Parvīn Dawlatābādī ’s poetry, with its dialogic status that seems to have one foot in tradition and one foot in literary revival, has a very clear and undeniable intertextual relationship with poets before and after her. On the one hand, her knowledge and engagement with classical literature and, on the other hand, her poetical language which speaks of the modern world, lead to a very new and original combination.
For instance, Dawlatābādī ’s poetry has an amazing intertextual relationship with Hāfiz. According to Hāfiz scholars, he benefited the most from the literature that came before him; thus, he transformed into the very essence of Persian poetry and culture.19Concerning the intertextual relationship of poetry of Hāfiz with poets before him and the influences he gained from others, see, Bahā al-Dīn Khurramshāhī, Zihn va zabān-i Hāfiz [Mind and language of Hāfiz] (7th repr. ed., Tehran: Nāhīd, 1380/2001); and Bahā al-Dīn Khurramshāhī, Hāfiz′nāmah [The book of Hāfiz], 2 vols. (14th repr. ed., Tehran: ‘Ilmī va Farhangī, 1383/2004). The relationship of Dawlatābādī ’s poetry to the poetry of Hāfiz cannot be reduced to mere influence or reception of his poetry; even when she is following ghazals of Rūmī (AH 604–672/1207–1273), Sa‘dī (AH 585–690/1189–1291), and others, one can hear the voice of Hāfiz through musical combinations, using internal as well as external music and making paradoxes that reveal the philosophical and ontological contradictions of human beings.20The birth date of Sa‘dī is approximate. It must be noted that such intertextuality is not a look at the past; in recreating many combinations, Dawlatābādī has paved the way for modern poets to use classical arrangements in their poetry.
For example, in her book, Manzūr-i khiradmand (The Sage’s intention), she has endeavored to find those ghazals that represent a literary dialogue between Jahān Malik Khātūn and Hāfiz; she has, consciously or unconsciously, joined in a dialogue with Hāfiz and other poets, though it is not pure imitation. Dawlatābādī comments on Jahān Malik Khātūn, “Topics, rhythms, rhymes and alignment shows her undeniable attention to [the] ghazals of Hāfiz and it is probable that in the gatherings and literary meetings of her uncle, Shāh Abū Ishāq, [she] had met and, in some cases, they had composed their ghazal as a form of conversation or answer.”21Parvīn Dawlatābādī, Manzūr-i khiradmand: Barrasī-yi ahvāl va guzīdah-yi ash‘ār-i Jahān Malik Khātūn [The sage’s intention: A biography and selection of poetry of Jahān Malik Khātūn] (n.p.: Gawhar, 1367/1988), 36.
Some examples of such intertextual relations are discussed here with regards to semantic and conceptual links of these poems. As I stated before, some of Dawlatābādī ’s ghazals represent her poetical link to Hāfiz and other poets. In 1350/1971, for instance, she writes:
As I was humbled in the tavern of love
I found a wealth of happiness and drunkenness22Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 7.
Which reminds one of Hāfiz:
As I was tamed in the tavern of love
Sadness welcomes me at every breath23Khvājah Shams al-Dīn Muhammad Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, ed. Parvīz Nātil Khānlarī (Tehran: Khvārazmī, 1362/1983), 1:636.
And Safā-yi Isfahānī (AH 1269–1322/1853–1904) says:
As I was humbled in the tavern of love
I had wonderful place and wonderful dignity24Safā-yi Isfahānī, Dīvān-i Hakīm Safā-yi Isfahānī, ed. Ahmad Suhaylī Khvānsārī (Tehran: Shirkat Nasabī-yi Hāj Muhammad Husayn Iqbāl va Shurakā’, 1337/1958), 279.
One point must be noted here that neither Dawlatābādī nor Safā have attained the paradox of Hāfiz in the second hemistich, that is the welcoming sadness. Though later on, Dawlatābādī used this poetical technique in at least a few of her outstanding poems.
Sometimes Dawlatābādī ’s poem reminds one of those written by others, like Shahriyār (1285–1367/1906–1988), due to the rhyme or the external music used. For instance, Dawlatābādī writes:
Why do you open this empty tavern?
Why such weariness with those afflicted with toil?25Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 5.
Which reminds one of the famous ghazal of Shahriyār:
You came at last, oh, precious but why now?
Why now, O fickle, that I have fallen down?26Shahriyār, Dīvān-i Shahriyār, 1:79.
Sometimes Dawlatābādī uses a combination with traces of classical poetry. For example, she says:
Did not go after the drunk for the sake of night-lovers
Challenge with the victorious drains our strength27Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 9.
The compound word “night-lover” reminds us of Rūmī’s:
Since I am a page to the sun, I will talk of the sun
Night I am not, nor night-lover to narrate sleep”28Mawlānā Jalāl al-Dīn Muhammad Mawlavī Rūmī, Kulliyāt-i Shams-i Tabrīzī, ed., Badī‘ al-Zamān Furūzānfar (14th repr. ed., Tehran: Amīr Kabīr, 1376/1997), 614.
Or another line in which Dawlatābādī says:
The eye became the sea and the heart was on fire
Oh, for the lonely calm of the dead29Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 97.
It seems that the expression of the eye becoming the sea [crying] is under the influence of the following distich:
Will cry as the sea and throw patience to the desert
And impatiently face danger in the desert.30Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz,1:696.
Further, sometimes trace of Hāfiz’ poetry is too explicit to be ignored—
I am in pain of life, where is the tavern
Tell me where is the happy song31Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 19.
—which immediately reminds one of Hāfiz:
No sleep at night thinking every night
Intoxicated for [a] hundred nights, where is the tavern32Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz,1:68. ‘Irāqī, Sa‘dī, Nāsir-i Bukhārāyi and Salmān-i Sāvajī have ghazals with the same rhythm and rhyme. See, Khurramshāhī, Hāfiz′nāmah 1:198. They show the continuation and intertextual relationship of subject and music of classical and contemporary poetry.
Dawlatābādī in another place says:
My life is tied to a strand of hair that you know
I am enslaved to hair you know33Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 121.
That is a reminder again of Hāfiz:
I love you dear and I know that you know
You who can see not having seen and read not yet written34Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:946.
And of course, the poem of Hāfiz has an intertextual link with the famous opening lines of Laylī and Majnūn by Nizāmī Ganjavī (AH 535–612/1141–1209):35Date of birth and death of Nizāmī Ganjavī is approximate.
You know the unwritten tale
You read the unwritten letter36See, Khurramshāhī, Hāfiz′nāmah, 2:1215.
And in another place, Dawlatābādī says:
The ford is closed and the insane has lost it
Kissing the mirage for the thirst37Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī, 182.
And Hāfiz says:
Cleaned and watered the front of the house of magi
the sitting sage invites young and old38Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:842.
Dawlatābādī states in another place:
Do not leave me as I am world-weary
Breath a moment of kindness and show me love39Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī 134.
And Hāfiz says:
If you do not caress me as a lyre
Kiss me like playing the reed40Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:670.
Dolwlatabadi says:
No fear if I prayed to the clay of the wine jar
The call of euphoria drops from this clay41Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī, 64.
And Hāfiz says:
Blossomed is the red rose; and intoxicated is the nightingale
(And given is) the invitation to merriment—– O Lovers, wine-worshipping!42H. Wilburforce-Clarke, trans. and ed., The Dīvān-i Hāfiz (Bethseda, MD: Ibex, 1997), 109.
Dawlatābādī writes in another part:
Forgive the drunk to the honor of the beloved
Do not ask where the flame of this wickless candle43Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī, 38.
And Hāfiz says:
Do not look at me, the drunk, with pity
The honor of the righteous will not be defiled thus44Khvājah Shams al-Dīn Muhammad Hāfiz, Hāfiz bi saʿy-i Sāyah, ed. Sāyah [Hūshang Ibtihāj], (6th repr. ed., Tehran: Kārnāmah, 1378/1999), 294. Khānlarī has preferred it as: “Absolve me in my pitiful drunkenness / The honor of the righteous will not be defiled thus.” See, Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:451.
Dawlatābādī writes in another part:
Where is the mirage of life, where the thirsty soul?
Where is the sāqī [cup-bearer] of sadness, my ancient acquaintance45Parvīn Dawlatābādī, Shūrāb: Barguzīdah-yi shiʿr [Brackish water: Selected poems] (Tehran: n.p., 1349/1970), 31.
And Hāfiz says:
The rectitude of work, — where? and, I ruined (wanting in rectitude)—where?
Behold the distance of the Path, —from where (rectitude) to (ruin)—where?46H. Wilburforce-Clarke, ed. and trans., Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 51.
Sometimes she inserts a hemistich of Hāfiz with some change in her own poem:
Do not pain the afflicted by the approved wine
There is no other forbidden in our religion”47Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī, 51.
And Hāfiz says:
Do not inflict pain and do as you like
There is no other sin in our religion48Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:168.
In 1968, Dawlatābādī quotes a hemistich of a ghazal by Sa‘dī, that is, “for the rightful love between us” and wrote a ghazal beginning with:49See Muslih ibn ‘Abd Allāh Sa‘dī, Kulliyāt-i Sa‘dī [Complete works of Sa‘dī], ed. Muhammad ‘Alī Furūghī (12th repr. ed., Tehran, Amīr Kabīr, 1381/2002), 546.
Our secret the eternal mystery between
The flame of eternal love is the life of you and I
and finishes with:
Help this sad and impatient heart of Pari
for the rightful love between us.50Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 21.
The language of Dawlatābādī in this ghazal follows that classical language intermingled with a little mysticism common in the jargon of previous poets. However, Hushang Ibtihāj (1306–1401/1927–2022) had used the same music of Sa‘dī’s poetry in a more modern and personal frame composing a poem without the mystical idioms of the ancient poets gaining more popularity,
What secret we have will not be in the open
As long as eyes play the courtship letters51Ibtihāj composed this poem in 1924. See H.A. Sāyih [Hūshang Ibtihāj], Āyanah dar āyanah [Mirror within mirror], comp. Muhammad Rizā Shafī‘ī Kadkanī (2nd repr. ed., Tehran: Chishmah, 1969/1990), 39.
Sometimes Dawlatābādī uses classical combinations successfully but there are better samples from other poets. For example, she writes:
No path to the mosque to undo the rosary of one hundred beads
Tear it form my throat to utter no faith I have52Dawlatābādī, Shūrāb, 35.
If out of two different readings we choose the personification of the rosary as the throat, her combination is one step ahead of Furūghī Bastāmī (AH 1213–1274/1798–1857). Furūghī Bastāmī says:
The hermit and the rosary of one hundred beads and dawn invocation
I and drinking the cup and insanity53Furūghī Bastāmī, Dīvān-i Furūghī Bastāmī, intro. Eadward Brown, Rizā Qulīkhān Hidāyat, Asad āllāh Mirzā Qājār, ed. Husayn Nakha‘ī (Tehran: Amīr Kabīr, 1336/1957), 189
Furūghī’s poem reminds one of Hāfiz with regards to topic, “Hermit and conceit and prayer and me and drunkenness and hope…” but he has not personified the rosary as Dawlatābādī has done.54Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:324. Farrukhī Yazdī (1268–1318/1889–1939) has used this descriptive composition (i.e., rosary of one hundred beads), personifying it accompanied with a sharp and critical irony towards the deceitful which exerts more artistic influence:
Nothing left of Shaykh’s porous rosary
As I counted [a] rosary of one hundred beads55Muhammad Farrukhī Yazdī, Dīvān-i Farrukhī Yazdī, ed. Husayn Masarrat, intro. Muhammad ‘Alī Islāmī Nudūshan (Tehran: Qatrah, 1980/2001), 72.
In 1342/1963 Dawlatābādī writes—
Every night sleep does not come to my eyes
Tresses of night carry me to insanity56Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 10. Note the similar rhyme scheme of these lines (in bold) by Dawlatābādī and the following lines by Khāqānī highlighted in the bracketed transliterations.
[hamah shab khvāb bar in didah harām ast marā
nuktah pardāz-i junūn gisū-yi shām ast marā]
—which reminds one of the following poem by Khāqānī (AH 520–595/1126–1198):
O beloved give me to the line of Baghdād, a cup of wine
Pour me Again to Baghdād in the cup57Afzal al-Dīn Badīl ibn ‘Alī Najjār Khāqānī Shirvānī, Dīvān-i Khāqānī-yi Shirvānī, ed. Ziyā al-Dīn Sajjādī (7th repr. ed., Tehran: Zavvār, 1382/2003), 39.
[Jām-i may tā khat-i Baghdād dih ay yār marā
Bāz ham dar khat-i Baghdād fikan bāz marā]
Shafī‘ī Kadkanī, influenced by the same rhythm and the alignment of marā, composed the poem entitled “Hazārah-yi duvvum āhū-yi kūhī” (The Second Millenium of Mountain Deer) in Nīmā’ī form: “Where does this image on the wall take me to?” [Tā kojā mībarad in naqsh-i bih dīvār marā].58Shafī‘ī Kadkanī, besides inserting a part of this hemistich by Khāqānī (i.e., I wish for “magi’s alley again” [Kū-yi mughān ast digar bār marā]), has also used a hemistich of Rūdakī: “One sent me a messenger in secret.” This poem alludes to many mythical stories and historical events so it is harmonious with the subject which is a look at the past. See: Muhammad Rizā Shafī‘ī Kadkanī, Hazārah-yi duvvui āhū-yi kūhī [The second millennium of mountain deer] (Tehran: Sukhan, 1378/1997), 19–21.
Sometimes Dawlatābādī takes a famous composition from classical poetry and embeds it successfully in her ghazal that can be found in the poetry of other poets. In 1348/1969 she writes:
The heart lost that passion little by little,
Finally, it happened to me as you know59Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 57.
Her old friend, Simin Behbahani (1306–1993/1927–2014), another famous poet, has also used the term “as you know” that Dawlatābādī had borrowed from Sa‘dī:
O friend, not being young to play recklessly
Or tell tales as you know, O friend60Sīmīn Bihbahānī, Jā-yi pā tā Āzādī [Footprints till freedom] (Tehran: Nīlūfar, 1377/1998), 269.
In some cases, it is obvious that Dawlatābādī is composing a poem copying the ancients, such as:
Spring is coming bringing tidings of the beloved
Giving magnificence to the old place61Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 57.
This is clearly an imitation of Rūmī’s famous ghazal:
Sprinkle the path, behold the beloved is coming
Tidings to the garden, scent of spring is coming62Rūmī, Kulliyāt-i Shams-i Tabrīzī, 243.
However, the most complex and intertwined relations of her poetry occur when following another poet; in this, the footprints of Hāfiz are found.
For example, in a ghazal she says:
Like dust on the road, I fell and passed out
Forgot myself and forgot the self63Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 73.
This poem reminds one of Sa‘dī’s:
O beloved, you entered and lost self
As if I moved from this world to the other64Sa‘dī, Kulliyāt-i Sa‘dī,549.
A few verses later, Dawlatābādī says:
Like a breeze after the solitude of a flower
I was lost in the petals of a bud65Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 74.
“Petals of a bud” is a reminder to a verse by Hāfiz:
Curl of the violet is your musk scented tress
Petals of the bud disgrace your pleasant smile66Hāfiz, Dīvān-i Hāfiz, 1:822.
Though there is a classical atmosphere, she creates unique imagery as in the same ghazal:
Spilled the blood of evening into the veins of night
So, at the end of life, I tell the story of the dawn67Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 73.
But the most interesting intertextual relationship of Dawlatābādī is probably the similarity between one of her ghazals with a poem of Shafī‘ī Kadkanī. Dawlatābādī has a poem entitled “Faryād-i khāmūsh” (Silent cry) beginning with:
I am a candle and cannot hide the self-burning fire
Like a butterfly burn[s] and cannot talk68Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 79.
The date of composing this poem in Dawlatābādī ’s biggest collection is not mentioned. She had published it in her first book, Shūrāb, the date of publication is 1350/1971 and “Faryād-i khāmūsh” is the first poem.69Dawlatābādī, Shūrāb, 2. Shafī‘ī Kadkanī has published a selection of his ghazals entitled Zimzimah′hā (Murmurs) in 1344/1965 and has a ghazal in this book beginning with:
I have something to tell you and I cannot
Cannot hide this hidden pain70Muhammad Rizā Shafī‘ī Kadkanī, Zimzimah′hā (Mashhad: Amīr Kabīr, 1344/1965), 26.
These two poems have the same alignments and the rhyme scheme is the same. The rhymes in Shafī‘ī Kadkanī poem are: guftan, nahuftan, giriftan, raftan, khuftan, shikuftan, and guftan, and that of Dawlatābādī’s poems are: nahuftan, raftan, suftan, shikuftan, and naguftan. In the introduction to Zimzimah′hā, Shafī‘ī Kadkanī states that he has composed these ghazals between the years 1339 to1344 (1960 to 1965) claiming that he has followed the great composers of ghazals but does not consider himself equal to them.71Kadkanī, Zimzimah′hā, 8–9. In those years, Parvīn Dawlatābādī had not yet published a book but, as it was mentioned before, her poems were printed in different journals and she was so famous that magazines interviewed her, even the writer of Zanān-i sukhanvar (Women writers) has commented on her poems.72See: Mushīr Salīmī, Zanān-i sukhanvar, 1:118. As well, there is a handwritten paper from Dawlatābādī ’s father who dedicated a poem to her with the same rhyme and rhythm in Mihr 1349 /October 1970 (see Figure 4).
Since Shūrāb was published in Isfand 1349/ March 1971, it is possible that she has answered her father’s poem; hence, the date of composing this poem must be 1349/1971. The other possibility is that Dawlatābādī previously had composed the poem and printed it in a magazine. In fact, it might be that Hisām al-Dīn Dawlatābādī under the influence had chosen the rhyme and rhythm for composing this poem in order to show his love to her. Thus, on the one hand, with the fame of Dawlatābādī from the 1320s/1950s, one may say that it is possible that her poem was published before Shafi‘i’s poem in a magazine and he has followed her.73Though Shafī‘ī Kadkanī was very young in 1344/1965, it seems that he was more or less well-known among literary people due to literary activities and publishing essays in journals such as Hīrmand. If we accept the writer of the introduction to Dīvān as Rahī Mu‘ayyirī, the well-known poet of the 1340s/1960s, Rahī had dedicated a copy of his first poetry book to Shafi‘i Kadkan with this phrase: “to my dear friend, learned poet, Mr Shafī‘ī Kadkanī (Sirishk).” See Rahī Mu‘ayyirī, Dīvān-i kāmil-i Rahī Mu‘ayyirī, [The complete works of Rahī Mu‘ayyirī], ed. Kiyūmars Kayvān (Tehran: Majīd, 1378/1999), 23. On the other hand, in an interview toward the end of Dawlatābādī ’s life, when asked about her favorite modern poets, she replied that she considers the poetry of Shafī‘ī Kadkanī remarkable and says that she has always paid attention to his poetry.74Lidā Vā‘iz, “Yād: dīdār bā Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [Memory: Meeting Parvīn Dawlatābādī] Rūdakī 23 (Urdībihisht-Khurdād 1387/May-June 2008): 184. Since I have not found this poem searching in Persian magazines, Shafi‘i’s poem takes precedence based on the date of publication of the book.
As it was mentioned before, Dawlatābādī ’s ghazals have a complex intertextual relationship with the ghazals of Hāfiz so much so that even when she is not using the rhyme scheme or the rhythm, the voice of Hāfiz is still heard. For example, she writes:
Do not scare me of wound on this body of afflicted by pick of sorrow
In your grasp we are the same song and music that we were75Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 90.
[Az zakhmah matarsān tan-i īn zakhmī-yi gham rā
Dar chang-i tu ān rūd u surūdīm ki būdīm]
Hāfiz has used the same words, chang and rūd and others, in his poems, but anybody familiar with the ghazals of Hāfiz understands that the Hafizian semantic and phonetic relationship of zakhm–zakhmah and rūd–surūd and the double meaning of chang (lyre-clutch) as well as the alignment of ki būdīm (combination of kih and the past tense of the verb ast) with rhymes such as nabūdīm and namūdīm and the musical combination of the verb plus kih is a reminder of the alignment nīst kih nīst in the poem of Hāfiz:
There is no vision which is not brightened by the radiance of your face
There is no eye which is not indebted to the dust of your door76Reza Saberi, The Poems of Hāfiz: Translated from Persian, (New York: University Press of America, 1996), 56.
[rawshan az partaw-i rūyat nazarī nīst kih nīst
mīnat-i khāk-i darat bar basarī nīst kih nīst]
Or in other instances where Dawlatābādī has used a verb twice reminding one of ghazals of Shams:
We do not have beloved in city, do not have
We have nothing in your city, nothing77Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 91.
Her technique brings to mind poems such as “let us go, let us go to the rose garden…” and “O you who have gone to hajj, where are you, where are you.”78Rūmī, Kulliyāt-i Shams-i Tabrīzī, 274, 566.
In another instance, Dawlatābādī says:
Open the door, open the door, I have come drunk and singing ghazals
am thirsty, for a sip of water79Dawlatābādī, Hilāl-i nuqrah′ī, 115.
And Rūmī says,
I returned, I returned, I returned from the city of the beloved
It took thousands of years for me to talk80Rūmī, Kulliyāt-i Shams-i Tabrīzī, 538.
Though Dawlatābādī has been mostly influenced by Hāfiz, the famous compositions of Sa‘dī can be found more or less in her poetry, too. For example, she says:
If the pure Sufi drinks to music of lyre and nay
Do not tell our story in the two worlds except by him
[sūfī-yi sāfī ar kishad bādah bih bāng-i chang u nay
qisssah-yi mā magū magū ba-du jahān bih ghayr-i vay]
You blow and nothing grows in my garden
nobody blames the month of Day81Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 120.
[mīdamī u namīdamad bār ū barī bih bāgh-i man
tuhmat-i bargurīz rā kas nanihad bih dūsh-i day]
Beside “sūfi-i sāfī” of the famous hemistich, “Sufi will not be purified till he drinks a cup…” another verse comes to mind:82Sa‘dī. Kulliyāt-i Sa‘dī, 634.
The heavy separation of the friends sitting upon my heart
you go and the camel does not accept the litter83Sa‘dī. Kulliyāt-i Sa‘dī, 561.
I believe that Dawlatābādī, in one of her best Nīmā’ī poems, gains the spiritual music of Hāfiz. Muhammad Rizā Shafī‘ī Kadkanī comments, for instance, on the spiritual music of Hāfiz:
In fact, it can be said that the artistic evolution of Hāfiz is more in the spiritual music than the form. For example, paying attention to this verse proves my statement:
“Although the khirqah of renunciation and the cup of wine do not go together/I am devising all these plans to please you” [Rizā Sābirī, 313] in which the perfect art of Hāfiz is presented, in this verse the spiritual music is seen more than the form. His creativity is in linking two opposing images “khirqah-i zuhd” and “jām-i may” and his art is to put together two contradicting elements in building a society and in fact, displays a contradictory society and puts to action an impossibility and by tying two opposing things he makes his poetry attractive and full of spiritual music reaching the peak of art.84Muhammad Rizā Shafī‘ī Kadkanī, Īn kīmiyā-yi hastī [This elixir of life] (Tehran: Sukhan, 1398/2019), 3:99–101.
Dawlatābādī, in the poem Zindigī īn ast (This is life) composed in 1362/1983, uses the same artistic opposition and creates a paradoxical image that from the point of ontology and philosophy represents contradictory images that most human beings have experienced:
Sweetness in poison and poison in sweetness
In a bright hope a dark shadow has fallen
To close the not yet opened road
Going to toward the future under the back cover of night
Throwing the bright day to the depth of longest night
To sleep under the white of the moonlight
To sit on the silver wings of clouds in a dream
To break the locks of castles of pain and suffering
To untie with desire
The strings, even if made of the golden rays of the sun
To be alive, to live, to be free85Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 245.
This paradoxical image and acceptance of life’s contradictions brings about artistic pleasure and opens a worldview to the reader which offers more logical than political and ideological views.86In the 1320s/1950s, Rawshanfikr magazine asked poets such as Forough Farrokhzad, Simin Behbahani, Sāyih and others why they wrote poetry. Sāyih’s answer is more like fiery leftist manifestos of that time, especially when he says, “I will sing my song in the heart of this small city and will take this song which is the story of pain and glorious war of humans to the farthest stars in the sky amid the destroyed walls of this bloody night.” See, “Chirā shi‘r mīgūyīd?” [Why do you write poetry?], Rawshanfikr 113 (Mihr 6, 1334/September 24, 1955): 16. In other words, understanding the ironic fact of being has been the concern of many thinkers.87Some poems of Dawlatābādī also show intertextuality with poems of others which cannot be brought forth here due to limitations of the paper.
The Poetical Self of Parvīn Dawlatābādī
The poetical self of Parvīn Dawlatābādī has an unbreakable link with the subjects she has presented in her poetry. One of these subjects is sorrow; in fact, sorrow, sometimes personal and sometime as philosophical despair, is present all over her divan. On the other hand, due to another aspect of her art, that is, her poetry for children, she cannot be considered a poet of despair. Dawlatābādī does not tackle political issues, but a faint voice of reaction to the problems of society can be heard in between her poems though in a classical language.88In a poem following Sa‘dī’s famous ghazal composed in 1353/1974 she writes: Tyranny breeds tyranny leading to more sorrow upon our bodies burning with injustice from the pride of [the] lucky No path left for me to the dawn as dawn does not shine from the night of the tyrants See: Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 94.
Mysticism and mystical motifs of grape and vine are also dominant in her divan. Kāmyār ‘Ābidī considers her mysticism due to her knowledge of classical poetry and writes: “Her comprehensive mastery of classical poetic language in undeniable. Most of her poems are biographical which sometimes leads to repeating literary traditions of poetry with influence or imitation. Maybe that is the reason there are traces of mystical thought in her ghazals.”89Kāmyār ‘Ābidī, “Kārnāmah-i shi‘r 1378” [Report of poetry 1999], Kitāb-i māh-i adabiyāt 36 (Mihr 1379/ October 2000): 30. Some have considered Dawlatābādī a Sufi and mystical poet. See: Murtazā Mudarrisī Chahārdahī, “Varaqī az tārīkh va ‘irfān-i mu‘āsir” [A page from contemporary history and mysticism of Iran], Armaghān 36, no. 9 (Āzar 1346/ December 1967): 471–72. If, on the one hand, one is to accept ‘Ābidī’s view, one must say that the mystical voice of Dawlatābādī’s poetry as a contemporary woman does not have originality and it is just echoing poets of the past. On the other hand, there is a history of mystical tendencies in the poetry of women of the Qājār era and one can consider her mysticism as the continuation of that poetical tradition.90Banafshah Hijāzī, Tazkirah-yi andarūnī: Sharh-i ahvāl va shi‘r-i shā‘irān-i zan dar asr-i Qājār tā Pahlavī-yi avval [The inner memoire: Biography and poetry of women poets from Qājār to first Pahlavi era] (Tehran: Qasīdah Sarā, 1382/2003), 23. ‘Ābidī himself accepts the poetical self and independent language of Dawlatābādī and writes: “Maybe we can follow the continuation of the ideas and stages of Parvīn I‘tisāmī in the poetry of Parvīn Dawlatābādī. Of course, in the poetry of Parvīn I‘tisāmī the humane aspect is mixed with the ethical aspect and in the poetry of Parvīn Dawlatābādī it is the poetical self which expands.”91Kāmyār ‘Ābidī, “Shā‘ir-i insāndūst: Bih yād-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī” [Human-loving poet: Remembering Parvīn Dawlatābādī], Andīshah va hunar 10, no. 17 (Spring 1388/2009), 15–17.
Relatedly, Farzaneh Milani considers Parvīn Dawlatābādī as well as Zandukht Shīrāzī (1288–1331/1909–1951), Zhālah Isfahānī (1330–1386/1921–2007), Simin Behbahani, Lawbat Shaybānī (1930–? ), Mahīn Iskandarī (1302–1357/1923–1978), Forough Farrokhzad (1313–1345/1934–1966), and Tāhirah Saffārzādah (1315–1387/1936–2008) as women who spoke of their inner emotions and even of men. According to Mīlānī, these women are not tied up with stereotypes and each, in different ways, was in search of a voice in a society which was enclosed by walls and hijab.92Farzaneh Milani, Veils and Words: Emerging Voices of Iranian Women Writers, (Syracuse, NY: Syracuse University Press, 1992(, 127.
As it was mentioned, sorrow was one of the major themes of Dawlatābādī ’s poetry and, even with a cursory look at her writing, one can find examples:
Pari in your barren life cry unfortunate tears
Like tulips I will do ablution with my heart’s blood93Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 15.
And as she herself says, her personal language is rooted in pain and suffering:
I am that teller of tales, the tired bound bird
Who learned to speak from my sorrows
Springs of sadness erupt form within my heart
I am drunk by my own bitter wine94Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 99.
If we want to draw an outline of a system of thought and the poetic persona of Parvīn Dawlatābādī, the collection of poems she has composed for children will not allow one to consider her generally as a sad and desperate poet. In contrast to her adult or usual poetry, there is plenty of love and hope in her poetry for children. So much so that if we put the two kinds of poetry side by side, Dawlatābādī looks like a very kind mother who hides her sorrow from her children. In other words, the happiness and hope that abound in her children’s poetry will adjust the sorrowful poetry for grown up readers. She writes:
Our hearts are full of hope
Our eyes shine like the sun
If spring, it is our happy life
Life is under our firm steps
Red blood runs in the veins of humans
We love the manifestation of being95Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā, 23.
In her poetry for children, she does not build an imaginary world without pain and suffering and hardship; she believes that though there is hardship and many autumns and winters in the world, spring and happiness will finally arrive.
For example, in one of her poems she portrays the hard and difficult elements of nature and talks of a small swallow caught up with the cold in winter that finally finds water and shelter in a house and:
When spring comes, it will fly
will fill the house with songs96Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā, 33.
In her children’s poetry, however, hope comes after hardship as she talks of the warmth of the house after the cold:
Sing with the hot fire of the night
song of brightness of [the] house97Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā, 64.
And the migrating swallows come back again:
Again, the swallow comes signing
Again, makes a nest here98Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā, 79.
And life is a song of happiness and freedom in the end:
its song [a] poem of freedom99Dawlatābādī, Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā, 74.
Frequently, there is a third-person narrator who talks wisely in her poems for children, but these poems are early instances of poetry for children. They are not devoid of imagery and lovely tales; she has even used syllabic rhythms in children’s poetry which undoubtedly has opened a path for the next generations of poets.100In her children’s poetry, Dawlatābādī uses element and motifs from nature and has paid less attention to religious themes. See: “Zahrā Ustādzādah, “Barrasī-yi muhtāvā-yi ash‘ār-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī Bar qāyiq-i abr′hā va Gul-i bādām” [Content analysis of Parvīn Dawlatābādī ’s poems for children, On the boat of clouds and Almond blossoms], Majalah-yi mutāli‘āt-i adabīyāt-i kūdak-i dānishgāh-i Shīrāz 3, no.2 (Fall and Winter 1392/2013): 2; and Kīmiyā Amīnī, “Tajallī-i shā‘irānah-yi bād: Vākāvī-yi ash‘ār-i Parvīn Dawlatābādī va ta’sīr va irtibāt-i ān bar tafakkur va burūndād isti‘dād′hā-yi nahuftah-yi kūdakān” [Poetical manifestation of wind: Analysis of Parvīn Dawlatābādī’s poetry and its effect and link with thinking and output of hidden talents of children], Naqd-i kitab: Kūdak va nawjvān 3 no. 11 (Fall 1395/2016): 75–100. It is noteworthy to add that Dawlatābādī ’s poetry for children has been popular and used to be published in children’s textbooks. For example, the poem “Again the swallow comes signing” was published in the Farsi book for fourth graders in the 1360’s/1980’s. See: Akbar Qarahdāghī, Yād-i shīrīn-i shi‘r′hā-yi dabistān [Sweet memory of primary school poems] (Tehran: Bihjat, 1390/2011), 136. Apparently, from 1379 to 1380/2000 to 2001, her poems have not been published in primary school books. See: Jamāl al-Dīn Akramī, “Digardīsī-yi nātamām-i parvānah-yi bih nām-i Fārsī-yi avval-i dabistān” [Incomplete metamorphosis of a butterfly called Farsi for first grade], Kitāb-i māh-i kūdak va nawjavān 47 (Shahrīvar 1380/September 2001), 68.
The other aspect of Dawlatābādī ’s poetic persona can be found in a poem which is a continuation of a tradition of contemporary women poets having a dialogue with the concept of man. Towards the end of Dawlatābādī ’s life, when she was asked in an interview how much of her poetry is feminine, she answers:
A poet’s poem is created through the process of her personal life. Is it possible for a woman to compose poetry which is not feminine? Anyway, the poet describes her thoughts and personal life. Now some female poets express themselves in a more feminine way and some in a lesser way. But maybe my poetry is not feminine in the way you asked.
Creation found the secret of being in my body
Told him to know the favor of life is with us
To be a woman is not demeaning, it is eminent
It is ironical to say woman deceived Adam
Woman was the light of knowledge, gave light to the world
Woman was the first word for freedom
Was the threshold of dignity, for the godly solitude101Vā‘iz, “Yād: Dīdār bā Parvīn Dawlatābādī,” 183.
The verses Dawlatābādī mentioned are from one of her poems entitled “Zan va zamīn” (Woman and earth). The title shows that she had the discourse of tradition and the mythological world of Iran in mind; with the allusions to Adam and Eve and a new interpretation of this story, she has a kind of dialogue with the traditional man giving a new definition of femininity.102Such interpretation is not without a past in contemporary Persian culture. In the Bahār magazine, an anonymous writer published a piece trying to conduct a dialogue with the discourse of patriarchy in order to create a new plan. We read in this piece: “Was created from the left side of woman to be equal with her, was taken from under the arm and hand of the man to keep and protect her. Was created from the nearest place to the heart.” See “Chirā zan az dandah-yi mard khalq shud?” [Why was woman created from the rib of man?], Bahār 1, no.2 (Jumādā al-Ūlā 11, AH 1328/21 May 1910), 65. It seems this is under the influence of some Biblical interpretations.Such interpretation is not without a past in contemporary Persian culture. In the Bahār magazine, an anonymous writer published a piece trying to conduct a dialogue with the discourse of patriarchy in order to create a new plan. We read in this piece: “Was created from the left side of woman to be equal with her, was taken from under the arm and hand of the man to keep and protect her. Was created from the nearest place to the heart.” See “Chirā zan az dandah-yi mard khalq shud?” [Why was woman created from the rib of man?], Bahār 1, no.2 (Jumādā al-Ūlā 11, AH 1328/21 May 1910), 65. It seems this is under the influence of some Biblical interpretations.
Maybe she did not rise against the concept of masculinity like Forough did.103Furough in her poem “Isyān” [Rebellion] says: But you man, you selfish creature don’t say this is shameful, this poem is shame Do you know how for these angry beings the cage is too tight, too tight See: Furūgh Farrukhzād, Dīvan-i Furūgh Farrukhzād (Mashhad: Nikā, 1381/2002), 35–36. Even this apparently sharp view of Furūgh Farrukhzad can be considered as a dialogue with the concept of traditional manhood which has for years vanquished the voice of women. After the publication of her Asīr collection of poetry, many attacked Furūgh Farrukhzad for why she has talked of her inner feelings, and Sa‘īd Nafīsī was one of the few who supported Forough Farrokhzad and wrote: “I read Forough Farrokhzad’s collection Asīr carefully—I had heard about commotion about her language. More than anything I admire this young and capable poet who has freely expressed her emotions. I do not understand what their problem is? The rabble who sells beet roots running around shouting about what is not in his merchandise but a young poet cannot say what is in her heart?” See; Sa‘īd Nafīsī, “Az shā‘irān chih tavaqqu‘ dārīd?” [What do you expect from poets?], Rawshanfikr 108 (Shahrīvar 2, 1334/ August 25, 1955), 7. An interesting example of woman’s voices can be seen in the deleting some of the poems of female poets, usually done by their family. Parvīn I‘tisāmī has a poem confirming unveiling entitled “Ganj-i ‘iffat” (Treasure of virtue); some of its verses were deleted from her divan by her brother Abū al-Fath I‘tisāmī, probably due to a fear of being taunted by the clergy. One of the verses states: “The eye and the heart need veiling but of chastity / The rotten veil was not the basis of being a Muslim.” See: Jalāl Matīnī, “Nāmah′hā-yi Parvīn I‘tisāmī va chand nuktah dar bārah-yi dīvān-i shi‘r va zindigī-yi vay” [Letters of Parvīn I‘tisāmī and a few points about her life and poems], Īrānshinasī 13, no. 1 (Spring 1980/2001): 8–13. Dawlatābādī has entitled her poem “Ganj-i ‘iffat” and in a way has accepted this traditional expression but has entered into a dialogue with it, offering a new picture not accompanied with veiling and covering. She has focused instead on the heart and purity of behavior but apparently a large section of the population did not have the strength to face an intellectual dialogue on this matter. However, continuing in this poem, like other female poets who talk of man when they want to explain themselves, she begins a dialogue with the concept of man and states that woman, like man, is a human, and man has come from the cradle of the same woman whom they have disregarded for many years.104This conversation regarding the concept of femininity and masculinity can be seen in the poetry of others such as ‘Ālam Tāj Qā’im Maqāmī (1262–1325/1883–1946) who says: I am no man, but to prove my suitability my man-like though cause commotion You brother, if woman is not like man in form see the masculine in meaning from my face See: Hijāzī, Tazkirah-yi andarūnī, 25. It is as if to produce a female voice, the poet has considered man as a human being by desexualizing it; thus, her female ideas are man-like or human-like and has thus gained independence. Comparatively, Nīmtāj Salmāsī (1285/1368/1906–1989) states: Iranians who wish for godly grandeur Must first search their Kāvah Must be a big man and a bigger determination to solve problems with his power …the curtain of ‘ajam is torn by your zeal Bring it so women can repair. See: Mushīr Salīmī, Zanān-i sukhanvar, 2:378. First, she says you bring a man to solve the problem; then she says men have lost zeal which belongs to patriarchal discourse and now women must repair the torn curtains of zeal! Finally, this conversation reaches concepts such as woman, man, pain, and cure, painting an aspect of a contemporary human looking for equality for the readers. It must be admitted that in Dawlatābādī ’s poem—maybe due to the dominance and influence of classical poetry—woman is more often described as a mother:
My kind hand became the cradle of being
giving birth to men and mothers, cause for greatness
If I respect you, like a man, your body
the pain of life is with you, cure is with me
I am woman, earth, soil, used to being humble
Call me god, eternal love mother.105Dawlatābādī, Mihrtāb, 175–76.